⸸ŁΞŦ MΞ DIΞ⸸ (2020)

[⸸ŁΞŦ MΞ DIΞ⸸]

Hello everyone! I'm a simple guy from "cold" Russia, who is trying to do something like "old witch house". Actually in this topic a want to show you my best work i think, so enjoy. I hope you like this track
(Sorry for my English)


Track on Soundcloud:

My Vk: https://vk.com/airgnida1337

And Vk group: https://vk.com/le1_me_die

[zin]

Hey, welcome to the site. Your track is not bad, but I feel like there's plenty of space for improvement. For starters it could be easily 2-3 minutes shorter, there's not that much going on. I believe that it's better to have a good short track that makes you want to press replay, rather than long one that makes you want to press next... I like that you started off with some vocal samples, it'd be interesting to have some more of them throughout the track. My fav moment during the track is around 1:35 and it lasts for around a minute. Overall it's a solid tune, I think there's a lot of trial and error ahead of you, but good luck with carving your own niche.

[⸸ŁΞŦ MΞ DIΞ⸸]

Hey, welcome to the site. Your track is not bad, but I feel like there's plenty of space for improvement. For starters it could be easily 2-3 minutes shorter, there's not that much going on. I believe that it's better to have a good short track that makes you want to press replay, rather than long one that makes you want to press next... I like that you started off with some vocal samples, it'd be interesting to have some more of them throughout the track. My fav moment during the track is around 1:35 and it lasts for around a minute. Overall it's a solid tune, I think there's a lot of trial and error ahead of you, but good luck with carving your own niche.

Oh, thanks for your criticism! I will definitely try to do better. I'm just beginner in making music for now.
(Sorry for my English)

[zin]

Hey, welcome to the site. Your track is not bad, but I feel like there's plenty of space for improvement. For starters it could be easily 2-3 minutes shorter, there's not that much going on. I believe that it's better to have a good short track that makes you want to press replay, rather than long one that makes you want to press next... I like that you started off with some vocal samples, it'd be interesting to have some more of them throughout the track. My fav moment during the track is around 1:35 and it lasts for around a minute. Overall it's a solid tune, I think there's a lot of trial and error ahead of you, but good luck with carving your own niche.

Oh, thanks for your criticism! I will definitely try to do better. I'm just beginner in making music for now.
(Sorry for my English)

great, looking forward to hear more. and no need to apologise for your english, you're doing just fine

[⸸ŁΞŦ MΞ DIΞ⸸]

Hey, welcome to the site. Your track is not bad, but I feel like there's plenty of space for improvement. For starters it could be easily 2-3 minutes shorter, there's not that much going on. I believe that it's better to have a good short track that makes you want to press replay, rather than long one that makes you want to press next... I like that you started off with some vocal samples, it'd be interesting to have some more of them throughout the track. My fav moment during the track is around 1:35 and it lasts for around a minute. Overall it's a solid tune, I think there's a lot of trial and error ahead of you, but good luck with carving your own niche.

Oh, thanks for your criticism! I will definitely try to do better. I'm just beginner in making music for now.
(Sorry for my English)

great, looking forward to hear more. and no need to apologise for your english, you're doing just fine

Thanks again. I apologize for my English because i'm often using a google translator, and he can make many mistakes in the text, for example, to convey words in the wrong sense.